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Breaking Free

I try to cut the pain away But the blood is not enough I pierce the layer that I see The one underneath’s too tough I hoped the damage that I did Would make me feel ok Though after all the blood had dried The pain wouldn’t go away Although it hurt I couldn’t cry Cutting deeper still The pain inside just wouldn’t die But I’m the one it killed And now I’m gone Finally free I took the pain away with me I had to go because it stayed And now my pain has gone away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2011 12:56:00 PM
Kimberly ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:11:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved featured piece Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kimberly. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:46:00 AM
Sometimes breaking free can be very hard...but needed. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Kimberly. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:01:00 PM
Thank you!
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congratulaions on your poem being featured this week, Kimberly
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:22:00 PM
lovely poem. very powerful, gripping. I can image the physical as well as the mental struggle going on here. kudos.
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:32:00 AM
wow, a deep write, the last stanza i like how you put cause the life was taken so was the pain, sad and deep write, creative and good write...P.D.
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