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I’m not asking for approval, that belongs to time The spoken words I cherish most, to you seem out of rhyme I’m not asking for acceptance, my muse rejects your praise In darker moments light is found —your comments weakly phrased (The New Room: December, 2021)

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Date: 12/12/2021 6:28:00 PM
As long as one stands firmly behind his/her convictions, then all censures and criticisms are merely noise. Well expressed!...ab
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 12/12/2021 7:48:00 PM
Great commentary, thanks.

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