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Breaking Dawn

Breaking Dawn

Night sky frays to day
Headlights make holes in the slate
Driving out the dark



© September 2013—Kim van Breda

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Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 12:56 PM

KIM, DON'T LIKE THE DARK NO MATTER WHAT..ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

November 27, 2013 at 12:57 AM

Hi Kim, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Bl Devnath

September 30, 2013 at 10:55 AM

Excellent haiku enjoyed now. Penned with beautiful thought. Loved always, bl

Honestly J.T.

September 28, 2013 at 8:51 PM

I really like this haiku. Well done

Andrea Dietrich

September 28, 2013 at 8:35 AM

wow, this is FANTASTIC. What great word choices too. FAVE

Poet Tacito

September 27, 2013 at 9:34 AM

This was damn awesome! Ah, the metaphorical depth here is FLYING!

Kim Van Breda

September 27, 2013 at 12:28 PM

Thank-you Drake my mentor :) I have been wrapped over the knuckles so many times for not getting a haiku format right-- some say this... some say that.. so, I stuck with a conventional 5-7-5. However... it was an early morning drive that inspired this write xx