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BREAKING DAWN

Breaking Dawn Night sky frays to day Headlights make holes in the slate Driving out the dark © September 2013—Kim van Breda

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Date: 5/12/2015 12:56:00 PM
KIM, DON'T LIKE THE DARK NO MATTER WHAT..ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:57:00 AM
Hi Kim, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 9/30/2013 10:55:00 AM
Excellent haiku enjoyed now. Penned with beautiful thought. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:51:00 PM
I really like this haiku. Well done
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:35:00 AM
wow, this is FANTASTIC. What great word choices too. FAVE
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Date: 9/27/2013 9:34:00 AM
This was damn awesome! Ah, the metaphorical depth here is FLYING!
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Kim van Breda
Date: 9/27/2013 12:28:00 PM
Thank-you Drake my mentor :) I have been wrapped over the knuckles so many times for not getting a haiku format right-- some say this... some say that.. so, I stuck with a conventional 5-7-5. However... it was an early morning drive that inspired this write xx
Date: 9/27/2013 6:02:00 AM
- I hope the day will be beautiful - Well done, haiku Kim !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim van Breda
Date: 9/27/2013 12:29:00 PM
Thank-you Anne Lise xx you are always so supportive and encouraging :)