Breaking Confidentiality

I saw the sky last night,
Rapt blue-black,
Freckled candle-light.
Where upon a cast, I ate.
To this lip, our tête-à-tête,
Never uttered,
Never muttered,
Until here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 30, 2008 at 6:59 AM
Stephen - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 12, 2008 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:32 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 10:13 AM
Stephen - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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October 22, 2008 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 8:27 PM
Congrats on having this wonderful poem featured this week - i enjoyed the read - God Bless
Winter Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations Stephen on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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October 19, 2008 at 4:13 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts in this concise format. Much said in a few words. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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October 19, 2008 at 2:46 PM
Stephen - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Peace always, John
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