Breakfast Dish

Look! Splashing fat fish.

Circling gull hovers low,

Eyeing breakfast dish.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 12:48 PM
- Great haiku, Darlene - // Anne-Lise :)
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September 11, 2014 at 1:19 PM
- It's not easy to write Haiku poems,Darlene .... and I'm never 110% sure that mine is right - but practice makes perfect :)) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Morning Mist - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 11, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, Anne LIse, I haven't written many. But I'm practicing.
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