Micah Freeman Poet Rhyme

Breakfast

Waffle House
IHOP
Make me some bacon
Pancakes and sausage
Your breakfast I'm achin 

Pitchers of coffee
Sugar and cream 
Biscuits and gravy 
Fillin my dreams       


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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 20, 2010 at 12:08 AM LOL. You must still be young and thin, Micah. This poem made me hungry! :) Dane Ann

Andrea Fischer December 31, 2009 at 12:56 PM cute but now I'm hungry! that aside ... Bacon/achin and coffee/gravy are slant rhyme cream/dreams are near rhymes these are good but your poem is weakest at the first, second, and fourth lines because of no rhymes.

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2009 at 10:46 AM Cute one!