Breakfast

Crunchy asteroids
Wet sand, cotton stones, masks, corn
Swimming in my bowl

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Jay Loveless

October 19, 2009 at 10:48 AM

makes me think of different kinds of cerial in a bowl =) do you mix them all together? i do sometimes lol...hey next time your spaced try cerial with soda, like pepsi or coke or dr pepper lol its really not as bad as it sounds X.X

July 17, 2009 at 11:55 AM

Creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Enjoyed it. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

June 29, 2009 at 4:41 PM

I thank my lucky stars for breakfast. Vince

L'Nass Shango

May 29, 2009 at 7:40 AM

Brother, you are all originality ... mind blowingly good.

Sharon Winter

May 20, 2009 at 6:58 AM

Such a unique writing style you own! There is something light and happy here for sure. Well, it's breakfast! Written way different than I have ever read it before! Want to thank you for all your comments. I must admit much of your work is way above my head. That doesn't say much for me. Apologies. I will try. Love, Shar