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Break You

Awake in my waking dreams of you You are there, and I am too Just one kiss, that’s all it would take; To make you break, down those walls inside of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2011 12:46:00 PM
Short, sharp and very poignant. I think you've said so much here in such few words. That takes talent. Matt x
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:05:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem nicely worded, Emma
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:31:00 AM
i really like this poem, i feel it really captures the essence of frustration you are demonstrating
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:41:00 PM
very nice write.cory
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