Break You

Awake in my waking dreams of you
You are there, and I am too
Just one kiss, that’s all it would take;
To make you break, 
down those walls inside of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Romano Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Short, sharp and very poignant. I think you've said so much here in such few words. That takes talent. Matt x
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Enjoyed the poem nicely worded, Emma
Latham Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:31 AM
i really like this poem, i feel it really captures the essence of frustration you are demonstrating
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June 5, 2011 at 5:41 PM
very nice write.cory
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