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ONCE IN LOVE ALWAYS IN LOVE, BREAK UP & YOU KNOW THE PAIN OF LOVE. FEEL HER IN EVERY BREATH,IN EVERY HEARTBEAT. YET CANT MUSTER THE STRENGTH TO APPROACH HER. LIFE TURNS MISERABLE,LIFE GETS WRETCHED. THINGS REMIND YOU OF THE LOVELY DAYS OF THE PAST. THE GUTS WRENCH SEEING HER WITH SOMEONE ELSE. SHE HAS MOVED ON,LEAVING ME BEHIND LIKE BROKEN TOY. NO LONGER NEEDED,NO LONGER USEFUL. I SPEND THE REST OF MY LIFE IN THE ATTIC OF MY LIFE.

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Date: 8/26/2013 11:52:00 AM
The last line of this piece is awesome; wish I had thought of it. You express a universal sentiment that all of us can relate to, and you did it well. Good job with this piece :)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/28/2013 12:02:00 AM
thnx 4 ur revw gr8 fan tc ~V~
Date: 8/24/2013 4:33:00 AM
touching poem.... A~D
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Date: 8/24/2013 4:26:00 AM
GREAT WORKKKKKK...!. 1
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