Break of Day

at horizons edge crimson sky touches the ocean
June 22,2018
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Chiri Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Well you do about all forms perfectly don't you? I usually don't get into this form too short but you said so much in those few words love it!;)
Adams Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 4:11 PM
thanks, i think i wrote this for a contest and got an n/a but not sure unless i go back through my work...i struggle in forms but try and master some... hugs :)
Breidenthal Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:37 AM
Spectacular haiku! Loved reading it this evening...-JWE
Adams Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 12:28 PM
thank you :)
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