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Break of Dawn

Send forth your waking sun to sway this slumber I beg a breeze to bargain in my favor My chains of memories shall break with morning Please pull me from the precipice of peril Or I might fall while Dawn is slowly rising

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/27/2023 5:31:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/7/2023 9:46:00 PM

That third line! Ah how seamlessly your lines flow. And those alliterations are stunning! Such a brilliant take . Well deserved win really. Congratulations

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/9/2023 12:56:00 PM

Thank you so much for this lovely comment! ??

Tom Woody

Date: 10/6/2023 8:44:00 AM

Nothing like a new sunrise to start over. Very nice Jess

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/9/2023 12:56:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tom!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2023 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations, Jessica! Love the ending! Wow!

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/6/2023 8:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim! Xo

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/6/2023 1:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Jessica. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 10/6/2023 8:12:00 AM

I'm honored by this win. Thank you so much! ??