Break Free

It's time too break out of my shell that all can see. Let the guys know that I am here, I can be true, I can be theirs; make life more clear. But, if I cannot break free, it's down to hell where I'll be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 7:53 AM
I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Amber. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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January 9, 2012 at 10:37 PM
Wow - sounds like all or nothing! Guys beware, I am sure. You got the important part, though - "be true" - shell or no shell, be true. Nice write - thanks for sharing. Joe
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January 8, 2012 at 3:29 AM
This is wonderful Amber, a statement of truth. enjoyed reading this. harry
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