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shocked cracked bones tormented with their new knowledge all began with a fall so hard the ground screamed not even when years earlier my child died within my womb and the knife brought blood to the skin to free him to be buried not even then did I know not until my bones knew they can be made no longer whole did I know I can break

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/6/2016 11:42:00 AM
Hey Susan enjoyed,silent screams aborted to be heard-with compassionate and understanding embraces..peace be you,tonytocaa
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Susan Walker
Date: 3/6/2016 12:19:00 PM
Tonytocaa, Thank you. You know how it is when someone feels your poetry! I read the first one on your list and loved it. I don't say that often.
Date: 2/13/2016 11:18:00 PM
Great write, and nice efficiency of words to paint a piercing view...
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Susan Walker
Date: 2/14/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you. The most meaningful life events flow effortlessly into poetry. I really appreciate your comment.

Book: Shattered Sighs