Bread of Remorse
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The bread of remorse is not very tasty..
Eat thou not the bread of remorse
For its taste is bitter, tough, coarse
Made from many wrong of yesterdays
As it has aged, dried__ changed assays
Replays of when it was just baked
And of those whom heartbreak suffered
From puerile stunts and brainless words
Discords that filled that loaf's innards
Now moldy, indigestible
This bread, remorse......abominable
In Honor of Brian Strand's contest
Up to twelve lines..
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010
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