Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

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The bread of remorse is not very tasty..

Bread of Remorse

Eat thou not the bread of remorse
For its taste is bitter, tough, coarse

Made from many wrong of yesterdays
As it has aged, dried__ changed assays

Replays of when it was just baked
And of those whom heartbreak suffered

From puerile stunts and brainless words
Discords that filled that loaf's innards

Now moldy, indigestible
This bread, remorse......abominable


In Honor of Brian Strand's contest
Up to twelve lines..

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 14, 2011 at 7:15 AM Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's "Upto Ten Lines" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Kash Poet October 13, 2011 at 10:56 AM Very thoughtful words penned by you Sara!Congrats on your HM.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 13, 2011 at 10:50 AM Congrats Sara on your HM in this contest with this excellent entry of poetic perfectiion my friend.. truly inspiring piece luv..

Bob Quigley October 12, 2011 at 4:53 PM Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Sara

Niall Greene April 20, 2010 at 10:51 PM i dnt get mosty of this type poetry but i like this one. thats wat i wanted to ask u cos u seem to know alot about poetry and u write it so good

Brian Strand April 1, 2010 at 12:32 AM Easter greetings Sara & thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Lynette Chachere March 31, 2010 at 4:27 PM your true creativity shows when you get rid of these bitter things, because you should become stronger. great write. -Always&Forever Lynette

Brian Strand March 31, 2010 at 8:24 AM Best wishes in the contest Sara.Rgds Brian .Soupmail

Robert A. Dufresne March 30, 2010 at 7:03 PM Wonderful advice Sara ...that stuff always comes back up on us...gotta get rid of it. --thanks for the comments -Robert

Doris Culverhouse March 30, 2010 at 4:32 PM great job mom!! bread of remorse.

Carrie Richards March 30, 2010 at 4:26 PM A wonderful description and comparison made about remorse. I loved this adaptation for Constance's contest, Sara! Well done!! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire March 30, 2010 at 3:40 PM Very clever, very cool, Sara. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono March 30, 2010 at 2:57 PM Very nicely said.I am in that contest to.Best of luck and hope you have a happy easter.Thank you for your kind words on my poems.