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Bread of Remorse

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The bread of remorse is not very tasty..

Eat thou not the bread of remorse
For its taste is bitter, tough, coarse

Made from many wrong of yesterdays
As it has aged, dried__ changed assays

Replays of when it was just baked
And of those whom heartbreak suffered

From puerile stunts and brainless words
Discords that filled that loaf's innards

Now moldy, indigestible
This bread, remorse......abominable


In Honor of Brian Strand's contest
Up to twelve lines..

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/14/2011 7:15:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's "Upto Ten Lines" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/13/2011 10:56:00 AM Very thoughtful words penned by you Sara!Congrats on your HM. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/13/2011 10:50:00 AM Congrats Sara on your HM in this contest with this excellent entry of poetic perfectiion my friend.. truly inspiring piece luv.. Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 10/12/2011 4:53:00 PM Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Sara Login to Reply

Niall Greene Date: 4/20/2010 10:51:00 PM i dnt get mosty of this type poetry but i like this one. thats wat i wanted to ask u cos u seem to know alot about poetry and u write it so good Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 4/1/2010 12:32:00 AM Easter greetings Sara & thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 3/31/2010 4:27:00 PM your true creativity shows when you get rid of these bitter things, because you should become stronger. great write. -Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 3/31/2010 8:24:00 AM Best wishes in the contest Sara.Rgds Brian .Soupmail Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 3/30/2010 7:03:00 PM Wonderful advice Sara ...that stuff always comes back up on us...gotta get rid of it. --thanks for the comments -Robert Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/30/2010 4:32:00 PM great job mom!! bread of remorse. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/30/2010 4:26:00 PM A wonderful description and comparison made about remorse. I loved this adaptation for Constance's contest, Sara! Well done!! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/30/2010 3:40:00 PM Very clever, very cool, Sara. Great poem! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Colleen Bono Date: 3/30/2010 2:57:00 PM Very nicely said.I am in that contest to.Best of luck and hope you have a happy easter.Thank you for your kind words on my poems. Login to Reply