Brazen Red Rooster

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in violet dawn he screeches a world awake barnyard bugler struts the sun is coming and he's the first one to know blooms and butterflies red rooster so bold like desert cactus flowers and amber at noon

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Alexis Y.

Date: 5/17/2022 12:59:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn, You composed three well-written haikus about a rooster. I remember growing up, I used to mimick our rooster from my back porch. We had a chicken coop when I growing up. Your poem brought back those memories. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/17/2022 4:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very nice expressions of appreciation, Alexis. Your recollections are a delight, too. Enjoy your evening, Evelyn :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/17/2022 11:54:00 AM

Enjoyed, although roosters don't wait for the sun as they are natural loud mouths! Aloha!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/17/2022 12:27:00 PM

They certainly let us know 'what's up.' Thank you so much for your thoughts. Aloha!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/16/2022 10:14:00 PM

Great haikus. The rooster may produce more.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/17/2022 12:23:00 PM

Glad you liked this haiku series. Thank you.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/16/2022 7:49:00 PM

Believe me, Evelyn, I know how hard it is to write good haiku. You've accomplished it splendidly in these three. Thanks for sharing them.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/16/2022 8:00:00 PM

You are quite welcome, Milton. Thank you so much for your kind expressions.