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Brawl

Blazing flames of wild rage burning heart like a coal. Bold abusive curses boiling blood like diesel. Blatant hot arguments broiling brains into fumes. Brawl ends with rued ashes! Date: 05/01/2018

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Date: 8/10/2022 4:02:00 AM
So true! One must cool off. God bless!
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Date: 12/13/2019 10:19:00 PM
Some hot imagery here! Well done.
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Date: 10/24/2018 6:26:00 AM
Hi Afzal, excellent write on your subject, the feelings, emotions, they grip the reader as one slowly digests the lines. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....Mike.
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Date: 7/8/2018 9:48:00 AM
Hot, hot , hot my friend
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Date: 6/23/2018 11:10:00 AM
A very nice poem it is, it certainly was a joy to read
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Date: 5/9/2018 6:51:00 AM
That's a brawl indeed - you have creatively captured the essence of a real drawn out brawl! Love it. Well done! Best regards. Pandita
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