Brawl

Blazing flames of wild rage
   burning heart like a coal.
Bold abusive curses
      boiling blood like diesel.
Blatant hot arguments
   broiling brains into fumes.
Brawl ends with rued ashes!


Date: 05/01/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 4:02 AM
So true! One must cool off. God bless!
Low Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 10:19 PM
Some hot imagery here! Well done.
Raven Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Hi Afzal, excellent write on your subject, the feelings, emotions, they grip the reader as one slowly digests the lines. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....Mike.
Juman Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Hot, hot , hot my friend
Ajmal Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 11:10 AM
A very nice poem it is, it certainly was a joy to read
Sietesantos Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:51 AM
That's a brawl indeed - you have creatively captured the essence of a real drawn out brawl! Love it. Well done! Best regards. Pandita
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