Brave New World

The eugenic scientist wanted me cloned
because of my high IQ and beauty,
after all, my friends and I went through
the IQ and beauty test duties.

Those who failed the test were denied access
to the cloning room and were doomed,
only 18 years of age and euthanized
while in the "sleeping" room.

I tried not to show any emotion or rage
or I'd be put in a holding brainwashing cage,
so robotically I lay down on the sterilized table
and played along as I was able.

They placed my cells in a petri dish
and placed them in a host egg provider
while covered in a caffeine solution, they then
shocked my cells till they slowly divided.

The experiment which they labeled #33
was a success as they came out of the womb room
having made three more clones of me
which they exclaimed was a victory.

Negative emotions overcame me so they
brought me to the brainwashing room
where they tried to convince me saying over
and over that cloning was for man kinds good.

Since, I failed at brainwashing they showed
me to another room down the hall
and thinking of my friends and missing
them all, I finally started to bawl.

I thought of the parents I never knew
and what they might've been like
snatched from them right after birth
because traditional parenting was deemed a curse.

Upon entering the room they harshly
strapped me down to the hard table,
reminding me that crying was wrong
and that I was being unstable.

Slowly, injecting the poison in my arm
it looked like the lights above me swirled,
saying that I was a heretic and a rebel
that didn't belong in this brave new world.



4-2-17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/5/2017 4:09:00 PM
Opps! Sorry, Cheryl. I just read a poem by Laura Loo too.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/6/2017 7:37:00 PM
okay
Date: 5/5/2017 4:04:00 PM
High 5 Laura Loo! Congrats on your win for this interesting yet frightening poem! So glad it's fiction.
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Date: 5/3/2017 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations Cheryl on winning the Brave New World contest! I know you did your best and I hope to see more of your poems! I enjoy reading your works. Keep on shining. :) -HANS
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Date: 5/3/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Hans; appreciate it much!~Che :)
Date: 4/28/2017 3:39:00 AM
I like this. Congratulations on your win. As we all fear, poets are only marginally necessary for the success of destruction. Long live freedom of expression, let us enjoy it while it lasts. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Kai; yes let us enjoy freedom of expression while it lasts! Many wishes back~Che :)
Date: 4/27/2017 7:30:00 PM
Very nice use of end rhyme! Congrad's & thanks so much for your hard work & your polished entry. Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 4/27/2017 7:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for placing me as one the winners Debbie; much appreciate it! Light & love back, Che :)
Date: 4/18/2017 9:06:00 AM
~Che:),You may just have brought the future to us. Very good write.
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Date: 4/18/2017 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Pete; much appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 4/6/2017 9:06:00 AM
Hi Cheryl, This is a remarkable story. It had my full attention from start to finish. I see this as a book or movie. Did you see Divergent? This puts me in the mind of that movie. A without a doubt seven. If I could rate it higher I would:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:40:00 AM
Hi Alexis, I did not see Divergent but now my curiosity is piqued! Thank you so much for Very Kind comment and visit; very much appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 4/3/2017 1:26:00 PM
Wow, Cheryl! This is cutting edge poetry. Very dark and futuristic. I loved this poem. Another side of your poetic self is revealed. A most excellent poem. Double 7 and instant fave. This I would nominate for POTW. It's a classic in my humble estimation.
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Date: 4/3/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thanks so much for Very Kind comment and visit Freddie; you are too kind!~Che :)
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