Braking Muse Report

Written for Miranda Lambert contest "Inspired".  6/22/11
 by- Robert A. Dufresne


Car
cruising
Ocean road.
Inspirations
drive.
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Freeman Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Cool car concept Robert! Using inspirations as image to putting the car in drive. A cool Lanterne of light, as it should be. Your comment of support is greatly appreciated. Agape, Moses
Horne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 1:18 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Robert : )
Ball Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Nicely done my friend. Really good imagery. God Bless, JB
 Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:10 PM
I really like the title--so fitting with the last two lines. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
Maverick Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Congrats on the win Robert, with this piece were you running on souper at the time? (great title)
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 7:08 AM
happy congrats on your delightful win, robert! :) huggs!
Guzzi Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:41 PM
ohh me too driving always does it for me and new places! Congrad's LIght & Love
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:27 AM
Dear Rob, I was writing some dreadful ABC forms until I looked up the Soup definition and saw this alternative. Much easier to work in this form. Thanks for stopping by. Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 3:12 AM
Remember this one well, Rob. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 7:52 PM
Cool little lanterne on your muse's inspiration. Congrats.
Kendrick Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 4:59 PM
Congrats..Sara
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 6:15 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Robert
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 6:03 AM
brimming with inspiration in so few words, robert... beautiful with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 8:36 PM
Congrats Robert on your HM in Inspired.. unique piece my friend.. luv..
Devonshire Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:32 PM
Thanks for the great chuckle you gave me with your comment on Wilma's "Incessant Growth," Rob. Love, Carolyn
Delacroix Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 9:27 PM
Oh ok! It is so noted. I had seen braking as news breaking because of the word "Report", lol, my misunderstanding. Well then, your lanterne is perfect! Have a good one yourself. Caroline.
Dufresne Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 9:06 PM
Thanks Caroline but it is "braking "as I have it spelled..instead of breaking .. Such as applying the Brakes for scenery? Pun intended as was "muse" for news. Thank you..have a nice one
Zzzzz Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 2:37 AM
Such a drive should be an inspiration to anyone. Nicely put. Good luck in the contest.
Susan Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Love the title!This is a very clever piece! Good luck in the contest!
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Highway I perchance? Luck in the contest. LOve, daver
Delacroix Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 10:15 AM
I see you are challenging yourself to use other forms of poetry, Robert! Awesome! This one is really good and something I like to do too. :) Let me just point out to you for the sake of the contest to add an "e" at "Braking", should be "Breaking". Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments on my poems. Love, Caroline.
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June 23, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Very nice Robert...I love those "Ocean roads"...enjoyed...Thanks for the nice comments...Marty
Devonshire Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 5:15 PM
Some of the best ideas for poetry come while we're driving, Rob. I thought this would be humor after reading the witty title, but you did a great job on Randa's theme. Love, Carolyn
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