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Braking Muse Report

Written for Miranda Lambert contest "Inspired".  6/22/11
 by- Robert A. Dufresne


Car
cruising
Ocean road.
Inspirations
drive.

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John Freeman

Date: 7/4/2011 7:56:00 AM

Cool car concept Robert! Using inspirations as image to putting the car in drive. A cool Lanterne of light, as it should be. Your comment of support is greatly appreciated. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 7/3/2011 1:18:00 PM

I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Robert : )

Judy Ball

Date: 7/2/2011 4:22:00 PM

Nicely done my friend. Really good imagery. God Bless, JB

Date: 7/2/2011 4:10:00 PM

I really like the title--so fitting with the last two lines. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/2/2011 11:06:00 AM

Congrats on the win Robert, with this piece were you running on souper at the time? (great title)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2011 7:08:00 AM

happy congrats on your delightful win, robert! :) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/29/2011 5:41:00 PM

ohh me too driving always does it for me and new places! Congrad's LIght & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 4:27:00 AM

Dear Rob, I was writing some dreadful ABC forms until I looked up the Soup definition and saw this alternative. Much easier to work in this form. Thanks for stopping by. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 3:12:00 AM

Remember this one well, Rob. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 7:52:00 PM

Cool little lanterne on your muse's inspiration. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2011 4:59:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations Robert on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 6:15:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Robert

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2011 6:03:00 AM

brimming with inspiration in so few words, robert... beautiful with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 8:36:00 PM

Congrats Robert on your HM in Inspired.. unique piece my friend.. luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2011 12:32:00 PM

Thanks for the great chuckle you gave me with your comment on Wilma's "Incessant Growth," Rob. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/24/2011 9:27:00 PM

Oh ok! It is so noted. I had seen braking as news breaking because of the word "Report", lol, my misunderstanding. Well then, your lanterne is perfect! Have a good one yourself. Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/24/2011 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Caroline but it is "braking "as I have it spelled..instead of breaking .. Such as applying the Brakes for scenery? Pun intended as was "muse" for news. Thank you..have a nice one

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/24/2011 2:37:00 AM

Such a drive should be an inspiration to anyone. Nicely put. Good luck in the contest.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/23/2011 3:50:00 PM

Love the title!This is a very clever piece! Good luck in the contest!

Daver Austin

Date: 6/23/2011 1:48:00 PM

Highway I perchance? Luck in the contest. LOve, daver

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/23/2011 10:15:00 AM

I see you are challenging yourself to use other forms of poetry, Robert! Awesome! This one is really good and something I like to do too. :) Let me just point out to you for the sake of the contest to add an "e" at "Braking", should be "Breaking". Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments on my poems. Love, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 6/23/2011 8:21:00 AM

Very nice Robert...I love those "Ocean roads"...enjoyed...Thanks for the nice comments...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/22/2011 5:15:00 PM

Some of the best ideas for poetry come while we're driving, Rob. I thought this would be humor after reading the witty title, but you did a great job on Randa's theme. Love, Carolyn

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