Brain Freeze

Cold glass of water
Wolf down bottomless gullet
Sudden brain attack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 31, 2008 at 5:10 PM
Enjoyed this one. The creative title caught my attention. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Keep on writing. Karen
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December 30, 2008 at 8:22 AM
Wonderfully written, Barbara, in very few words, just as it doesn't take a lot of a something cold to create brain freeze. Thanks for your kind comments about my work. May your New Year be blessed with joy and happines. All Best, Orma
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December 29, 2008 at 11:43 AM
Yes...we've all done it!! Ouch!! ~ Carrie
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