Brain Damage

Green spores, thunderbolts
Rolling spheres taking over
Possibilities…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 6, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Interesting view, leaving the reader with something to think about. I like the ending. Keep on writing! Have a nice weekend. Karen
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May 28, 2009 at 12:47 PM
hmmmm ..on the same train of thought? Spiderweb? Light & Love...brain damage..scar tissue
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May 25, 2009 at 3:04 PM
roller coaster in or brains,love the imagery,and possibilities are never limited--bravo--charma
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May 25, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Impressive writting! Jeremiah
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May 25, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Nice work Cesar, possililities are endless...Raul
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May 25, 2009 at 5:23 AM
Brilliant writing my talented friend...superb.
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May 24, 2009 at 8:29 PM
loads of possibilities.... Many can take over... Great Job
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