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Brain Damage

Green spores, thunderbolts Rolling spheres taking over Possibilities…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/6/2009 8:04:00 AM
Interesting view, leaving the reader with something to think about. I like the ending. Keep on writing! Have a nice weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/28/2009 12:47:00 PM
hmmmm ..on the same train of thought? Spiderweb? Light & Love...brain damage..scar tissue
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Date: 5/25/2009 3:04:00 PM
roller coaster in or brains,love the imagery,and possibilities are never limited--bravo--charma
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:20:00 PM
Impressive writting! Jeremiah
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:08:00 AM
Nice work Cesar, possililities are endless...Raul
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:23:00 AM
Brilliant writing my talented friend...superb.
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:29:00 PM
loads of possibilities.... Many can take over... Great Job
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