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4/20/2026 for Six and Seven Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Bracelet of Stars

Wearing his bracelet, she was a sight
made of bright twinkles, and swirling moonlight.
Given by Vincent and his vivid brush, 
the bold starry night did not blush. 
As he gazed from his hospital room,
Night was the bride, Vincent the groom.

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Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2026 at 1:28 PM Oh wow. Super creative one here. Starry starry night. Remember that song from the 70s I think by Don McClean. Congrats for your win David Crandall April 29, 2026 at 3:30 PM Thanks, Andrea! Oh, yes, I remember that song - maybe I was thinking about it.

Kim Rodrigues April 21, 2026 at 7:45 AM Wonderful! David Crandall April 22, 2026 at 5:50 PM Thanks, Kim!

Paula Goldsmith April 20, 2026 at 12:37 PM What a creative write. It was a fun to read. "Good Luck" I also did, "BRACELET OF STARS." Have a fun day writing away............ David Crandall April 21, 2026 at 6:39 AM Thanks, Paula!

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 20, 2026 at 8:53 AM Hello David, Well, you caught Vincent mid-hallucination and let the scene stay tender instead of tragic. I like how the bracelet becomes a kind of quiet portal. It leaves a soft afterglow, like the painting is still breathing. Blessings, Daniel David Crandall April 21, 2026 at 6:38 AM Hi Daniel! Thanks for the appreciation!