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Six And Seven Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
20th April 2026

Bracelet of Stars

A bracelet of stars adorn the sky Twinkling brightly they gleam in one’s eye They light up the dark of night A string of beauty, a heavenly delight Stars are a wonder, a godly treasure Hung in the night for earthly pleasure.
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Reese Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 5:28 PM
Very nicely done I bet you did well in the contest
Edmonds  Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 5:50 PM
I did well, thank you very much Charles… Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 1:18 PM
This is JUST right. Well done and congratulations
Edmonds  Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 1:40 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, your words and congratulations are appreciated… Beryl
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 4:02 PM
beautiful and peaceful
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 2:13 AM
Thank you Paige… Beryl
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 10:48 PM
Your eulogy on the stars is excuisite. Great write, Beryl.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 11:53 PM
Thank you Subimal, I appreciate your comment very much indeed… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 12:49 PM
What a lovely/creative write. It was a fun read. "Good Luck" I also did, "BRACELET OF STARS." Have a lovely day writing away............
Edmonds  Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Paula. I have read and commented on your entry in the contest, it’s lovely… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 9:06 AM
Dear Beryl, I like how you treat the stars as both ornament and offering, something hung up for anyone willing to look. It may be a small poem, but it leaves a clean, bright aftertaste. Amen! Blessings, Daniel
Edmonds  Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Daniel, I truly appreciate your comments on this poem. It was a pleasure to write for the six line poetry contest. Blessings in return, Beryl
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