Boys

in my teens I put the worms on the hooks boys were chicken

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Abe Lopez

Date: 9/18/2009 4:27:00 PM

those guys missed out on the whole experience.....nice write!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/18/2009 11:24:00 AM

I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Veronica. Love, Carol

Veronica Joseph

Date: 9/18/2009 8:03:00 AM

they were also lazy.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/17/2009 2:14:00 PM

I did this too though my brother wasn't chicken LOL Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2009 1:07:00 PM

Hah! Yes, we women take a lot of heat for being "the weaker sex," when I do believe it is the other way around in many respects. In grade school, the nuns took us to an open casket viewing for a classmate who had died. Several of the boys got sick. The girls respectfully prayed for Kathleen's soul. Worms are pretty slimy and I sometimes have trouble hooking them properly, but at least I try. Great write, Veronica! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 12:30:00 PM

Never know what kids will do. It is good that you were there for them. Nicely done. Good topic. Keep writing