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Boy With Multicolored Eyes

crouched... ready attack or flee? he hides exposing not even the speckled ambiguity of social foliage. watching... hunger reaches out to feed where fear springs back- this quiver held between is snapping snarling pain. He's not afraid of me but that he'll tame! Oh, wild intensity How can he trust me just to touch undo the trap and set him free?

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Date: 9/18/2022 4:58:00 AM
I'll have to be careful here. You always read between the lines! Well spotted! E.
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Date: 9/17/2022 9:38:00 PM
Here's an interesting two-way 'trap:' What 'traps' him, once released -- may trap he/she who frees... :) gw
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Date: 6/29/2022 11:56:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem, Christuraj. You've led me to have alook at yours and there, first up, is Wasp, which I adore! Elizabeth
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Date: 6/29/2022 11:37:00 PM
Unique writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/29/2022 5:23:00 AM
A lovely write! Enjoyed the format! Congratulations!
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 6/29/2022 8:44:00 PM
I can't tell you how much this means to me! Just makes my day! Thank you! Elizabeth
Date: 6/22/2022 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, Aurore. Amazing isn't it, how we always bring ourselves to what ever we read! Elizabeth
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Date: 6/22/2022 11:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem, I imagined this a few different ways.
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