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4/29/2025 for Acrostic Agility Poetry Contest sponsored by Oliver McKeithan

Boys must perfect their batting stroke. Once done, and they hit a home run, You'll find that yonder window broke.

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Date: 5/4/2025 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/5/2025 3:11:00 PM
Thanks Thriveni - I broke a glass pane, but I placed in the contest!
Date: 5/4/2025 10:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Acrostic poem " Boy" in the contest, David :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 5/4/2025 8:19:00 PM
Thanks :-)
Date: 5/3/2025 4:50:00 PM
Funny! Congrats!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 8:11:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 5/3/2025 4:44:00 PM
Congrats, David! I started with boy but finished as a cat :).
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Trina!
Date: 5/3/2025 4:21:00 AM
how many glass panes on your account dear poet?
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 9:17:00 AM
Haha, I believe it or not, I only broke one window with a home run. It was our neighbor's kitchen window.
Date: 5/1/2025 11:21:00 AM
Lol. I hope it's not my window. I don't like baseball.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 9:18:00 AM
Haha, I love baseball, but I can't play it anymore.

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