David Crandall Poet Other

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5/1/2024 for Intro "POI"-etry Poetry Contest sponsored by Hilo Poet

Boy

Intriguing hollow log
Boyhood, sunshine, smiling
Slippery, slimy frog

Summer days whiling
On undulating grass -
Beauty so beguiling

Cloudy memories, alas,
You, outshining fog -
My bonnie lass

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Sara Kendrick June 20, 2024 at 5:34 AM Ahh!! Little boys can get into all kinds of muck! Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K David Crandall June 20, 2024 at 11:16 AM Thanks Sara, you can say that again! well put :-)

Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2024 at 4:40 PM First verse is my favorite! Congrats! David Crandall June 19, 2024 at 7:31 PM Thanks Kim! Yep I liked the way that verse turned out.

William Kelii Kekaula June 19, 2024 at 9:45 AM David: I've read similar priceless smiles on needful days, my friend. Aloha for your participation, William David Crandall June 19, 2024 at 9:48 AM Aloha and thanks for your contest - it was fun!