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5/1/2024 for Intro "POI"-etry Poetry Contest sponsored by Hilo Poet

Intriguing hollow log Boyhood, sunshine, smiling Slippery, slimy frog Summer days whiling On undulating grass - Beauty so beguiling Cloudy memories, alas, You, outshining fog - My bonnie lass

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Date: 6/20/2024 5:34:00 AM
Ahh!! Little boys can get into all kinds of muck! Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 6/20/2024 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Sara, you can say that again! well put :-)
Date: 6/19/2024 4:40:00 PM
First verse is my favorite! Congrats!
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David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2024 7:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Yep I liked the way that verse turned out.
Date: 6/19/2024 9:45:00 AM
David: I've read similar priceless smiles on needful days, my friend. Aloha for your participation, William
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David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2024 9:48:00 AM
Aloha and thanks for your contest - it was fun!

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