Box Elder Play

Pinwheels flying high.
Box Elders in Falls array.
Helicopter play!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 2:18 PM
This an interesting Haiku. I can see this scene. Sara
Moreno Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 9:17 PM
This is masterful as well, you are mastering this form...Raul
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October 6, 2009 at 8:41 PM
Creative use of imagery in this poem. Nice use of personification. I see you recently joined our Soup Family. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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