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Box Elder Play

Pinwheels flying high. Box Elders in Falls array. Helicopter play!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/10/2009 2:18:00 PM
This an interesting Haiku. I can see this scene. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2009 9:17:00 PM
This is masterful as well, you are mastering this form...Raul
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Date: 10/6/2009 8:41:00 PM
Creative use of imagery in this poem. Nice use of personification. I see you recently joined our Soup Family. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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