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bowl of haiku

Milky water race Slippery sloping mountains On earth’s fresh cut grass --------------------------------- A broken Puzzle in the sky Can’t be fixed --------------------------------- Zephyrs race Wishing to save souls Summer days ------------------------------- Wondering Will I ever see True nature --------------------------------- Silent nights Only fingers move As I write

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Date: 10/22/2009 11:56:00 PM
Excellent James especially no 5.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:46:00 PM
Nice series James, love its entirety...Raul
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Date: 5/9/2009 3:00:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this haiku series. Enjoyed it! Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/6/2009 4:39:00 AM
This is a wonderful bowl of sweet images...well done..keep bringing it!!
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:09:00 AM
Especially like the last one in your bowl James.Rgds Brian
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