James Faulkner Poet Haiku

Bowl of Haiku

Milky water race 
Slippery sloping mountains
On earth’s fresh cut grass
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A broken 
Puzzle in the sky 
Can’t be fixed
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Zephyrs race
Wishing to save souls
Summer days
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Wondering 
Will I ever see 
True nature
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Silent nights 
Only fingers move 
As I write

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Brian Strand October 22, 2009 at 11:56 PM Excellent James especially no 5.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Raul Moreno May 18, 2009 at 12:46 PM Nice series James, love its entirety...Raul

May 9, 2009 at 3:00 PM Nice use of imagery in this haiku series. Enjoyed it! Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Christopher Higgins May 6, 2009 at 4:39 AM This is a wonderful bowl of sweet images...well done..keep bringing it!!

Brian Strand May 6, 2009 at 12:09 AM Especially like the last one in your bowl James.Rgds Brian