Bounces over and back sweet music sings

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unrhymed couplets including the title adds up to nine lines representing the cloud in formation

Thee sweetest lily and flower of Eden’s garden growing wild and free 
held under this enchantment where the daises circles around gold 

Flower of hearts where there shades of apple blossoms pink 
dazzling the night under the teardrops of angels deeply unfold petals 

Within a black satin velvet sky twinkling centre of stars your beauty outshines 
with piercing diamond light inside a halo you are crowned perfectly regal 

Princess of the starlight gaze faraway holding a dream enveloping an echo
enchanted by the magic you spell one in a thousand whispers

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Jo Daniel

Date: 9/29/2017 7:02:00 AM

Sweet and captivating , Liam:)

Sunshine Smile

Date: 9/29/2017 2:02:00 AM

- Yes ... sweet music sings in this beautiful poem, Liam - Best wishes and wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/28/2017 8:00:00 PM

Beautiful, liam, enjoyed reading, but I missed your dear friend Sunshine... ~`* Hugs Eve

Sunshine Smile
Date: 9/29/2017 2:03:00 AM

- Thanks, Eve :)

Donna Loughman

Date: 9/28/2017 3:53:00 PM

Liam, this is beautiful! I like the way you structured it. This is written in a way that even Byron would find hard to surpass!

JAN ALLISON

Date: 9/28/2017 3:51:00 PM

such enchanting imagery and i especially love the black satin velvet sky stanza:-) very well written couplets Liam thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/28/2017 3:51:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

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Bounces over and back sweet music sings