Bottom's Up From Here

sometimes sad's so stinkin'  easy
Whining all the weary day
Sinkin' lower with each moment
Knowing it won't go away
This hole I fell in's gettin' deeper
But I could really give a damn
There aint no way I'm just a weeper
Sads so easy  as I am
Change? I know I never can
Jevva see a sadder man?
Cudda smile replace a frown?
Maybe since it is your round
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 4:18 PM
~lol~ Don't mean to laugh at your sadness (if this has truth to it), just the cleverness of the write. Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 3:30 PM
It is my round so I am sending you a big smile for this wonderful write.
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