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Bottomless Pit

The pain subsided as I lifted the drink space still resided deeper I still sink Need a love to take up space to fill that empty hole a need to leave this place to empty my poor soul Waiting for some sun to chase my rain for that I am not the one only I am to blame A long game of chess my life seems to be lost all my pieces and caused a mess as you can definately see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/9/2011 10:43:00 PM
there is so much sadness in your poetry, you release all of it in your writing, but you do write with passion and how you feel. and i do enjoy reading it.
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