Eve Roper Poet Verse

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Pick-A-Title, Vol 38 - Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

 Sllabale Count of 342-453-232-335-615 Yalto form by Edward Ibeh

Written 8/28/2023

 

 

 

 

Bottomless Depth

Impressions
Bottomless Depth
In mind.
An unexplored
Blue world pursues to
Crawl inland.
Foaming
Fingers text
Imprints
Left against
Golden grains
Of sand, receding.
Sonorous wave hum sound,
Back
To bottomless depth.

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Hilda Greenhough September 27, 2023 at 12:15 PM This is an amazing poem. I felt as though I was at the shore facing the ocean.

Edward Ibeh September 26, 2023 at 4:36 AM Such a wonderful Yalto, Eve:-) I enjoyed it tremendously. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2023 at 11:09 AM - Excellent, Eve ... impressive form with these short lines - (I wrote one a long time ago ... can't remember the title... too many poems :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Take care. .. hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar August 28, 2023 at 11:31 PM Great imagination, Eve.