Bottle

Behold my love, my Valentine.
On my tummy let your hand recline.
Tenderly touch that little bulge.
Trembling fingers as I indulge.
Laughter plays across your lips.
Elated we embrace and kiss.


17/02/2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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James Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:12 PM
Aaah baby buldge! You so good now you write in the future...did i mis Feb?
James Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 1:36 AM
I was referring to the feb date at the end of the poem...but I do like fantasy!
Murray Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Considering I had my last baby twenty years ago James, obviously, just like Valentine's Day, the whole thing's a fantasy.
Daniel Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 4:13 AM
I loved the secret message in this, Jean:)
Murray Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 4:25 AM
Thank you Jo. I wrote it for Kim's recent secret message contest.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:33 PM
This is perfect Jean! ; ) 7
Murray Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 4:23 AM
Thank you Connie. It's one of those moments we women never forget.
Vaso Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Finally a poem about me me me! Loved this! :)
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:20 PM
There is a little bulge my love. If only I could blame it on you.xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:42 PM
how cute this is, Jean. I am assuming what Victor assumes. Awesome little poem.
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Thank you Andrea. I am thinking of changing the title now the secret is out.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Lovely, Jean! Hugs, Kim
Murray Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:51 PM
Thank you Kim.
Bauer Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 4:34 PM
ha! you're a clever one, jean!
Murray Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Not too clever I hope Ilene.
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