Bottle

A common occurance lately is to see a discarded bottle floating in the creek or on the 
side of the road. It was three am and I had a serious delirium working on my mental 
state; and a bottle started spinning and morphing into a rocket ship. The ship formed 
before my eyes into a bright lime green beauty of a vessel. The speaker stated that 
the flight will be leaving as scheduled and all should board appropriately and 
promptly. I decided well why not! I need a big adventure to tell my grandkids one 
day. I was fitted with a special space suit and mask. The monitors were all lit and 
flashing then the count down started. I wanted to run but could not get off the 
vessel due to the doors had been sealed tight. I said a prayer and closed my eyes as 
the g-force melted me to the seat with an intensity I had never known before; It was 
like my eyes were about to explode into space. Suddenly there was silence and 
weightlessness and I could not comprehend reality. The speaker stated that it would 
be docking  on the moon in one hour and I should be ready for a moon walk. Well 
who would not want to walk on the moon?? Right on schedule I took a giant leap for 
women being the first to walk on the moon. Hillary was real mad she couldn't beat 
me to the door! Bill was still stuck in his seat with Monica. Yep I was glad to catch 
the morphing bottle late that night...what a wild ride to tell the grandkids!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Maverick Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 3:20 PM
WOW Doris.." What a blast of Imagination.! I was quite carried off.." On this wild ride of a read; really good Must remember to get my passport for Next time.. As I am sure this destination and flight is going to get busy..!
A   Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 8:28 AM
interesting and wonderful anjoyed your poem, Doris,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 12:50 PM
VERY creative, Doris. YOu have quite an imagination on you!! Luv, Andrea
Knop Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Soup Mail, Doris! Enjoyed the read!...Gert
Freeman Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Fantasy you say! Smile! Weird way the way morphine does ones mind in a dream. Cool, Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Well, if one is going to dream they should dream big right..What a wild imagination my daughter has...Good job...If this is for a contest, it should be a winner...Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Mom
Babcock Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 9:00 PM
That was some ride to the moon but trying to beat Hillary to the door. This sounds like some of my dreams they can get pretty wild. I am feeling a bit better today but lungs still are pretty tight. Phyl
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