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Here's another version of 'Both come true,' once again inspired by my good friend, Maureen Mcgreavy. ...

Both Come True Part 2 -- Come Through

wish upon a star ...

  wish upon a shape ... instar
 
     butterfly ... comes through ...
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Two green thumbs up! <3
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July 15, 2018 at 12:19 PM
sad face. soup mailed you. <3
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:30 PM
Glad you read this one, and that you have given it the thumb stamp of approval … Want you to know that I am on the verge of taking a long break from P.S. … May or may not be back. Will miss your wit, your verve, your caustic comments, your brilliance, and most of all … You. Best wishes, Gershon
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:24 AM
I have seen both poems GW, a joy to read today my friend:-) I love to see poems inspired by the thoughts of others:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Man Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 11:11 AM
This was the progression to beauty.. awesome! Come see me...
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Thank you for the visit, L.M. Just want you to know that I am not ignoring your invitations. Rather, I am on the verge of taking a lengthy break from P.S., and am trying to wind things down. … The Muse seems to have bid me adieu for a stretch. So, best wishes, my friend, ~ gershon
Gauthier Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Love this part - I better go looking for part 1... Line xx
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Don't get lost now! … Just to let you know: I am about to take a lengthy break from P.S. … Just don't have the old inspiration anymore for whatever reason … And when it's gone, it's gone, I assure you. … So, here are my best wishes to you and to your husband, and a huge thank you for all of your support. ! ~ Gershon
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