Borrowed Words - The Question - Long Version

"Once upon a time there was a boy who loved a girl, and her laughter was a question he wanted to spend his whole life answering" (Nicole Krauss)...
and so went ventured forth to do so,  

stringing the answers together like a song, 
and all of them were right, but all of them were wrong:

a bell, a wind-chime in a soft-summer breeze
sparkling wine, a coquettish tease  
rainbow ends and butterfly wings
eternal blossoms and early Springs
a mirthful cornucopia of fruit
ribbons and bows, adorable, and cute
an inducement to bravely speak
a dance, grown closer, cheek to cheek
a siren song on a lonely sea disguised as a question, 
but really a keya challenge or a call to action
a promise of elusive satisfaction
an opportunity to grow,
the seeds of love at last to sow
a flash of lightning and a thunderbolt
followed by backflips and a somersaults
a two-way mirror of himself
a kaleidoscopic image of a misfit elf
an invitation to the blues
a year and a half in Tom Waits shoes
a sojourn of unending length
a demonstration of enduring strength 
inspired confidence that what is right
will part dark clouds when no hope's in sight
a reminder of an earlier day
a twinkling star, a moon's silver ray.
a lifelong quest, a sacred duty
a mysterious, arresting beauty.

In the end, he kissed her memory goodbye
as his immortal spirit floated in the sky.
He pondered, when he got to Heaven's door, 
a question he had no answer for.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 5:20 PM
especially liked these words: the seeds of love at last to sow a flash of lightning and a thunderbolt followed by backflips and a somersaults a two-way mirror of himself a kaleidoscopic image of a misfit elf
Crandall Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Thanks, Sara - glad you liked it!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 11:18 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Crandall Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Rodgers Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Hello David, There’s whimsy here, sure like wind-chimes, butterfly wings, Tom Waits shoes, but it’s all in service of something deeper. I like your final image, him floating toward Heaven’s door with a question still unanswered? Very existential. Autumn Blessings, David, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Hi Daniel, to my life is one big unanswerable question composed of many unanswerable questions :-))
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