Notes About The Poem
FOR: Borrowed Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Crystol Woods
October 19, 2025
The Magic 9 poetry form: https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/magic-9-poetic-forms

Borrowed Words: Beware

a Magic 9 poem

Dad was belligerent like a mad Irish bull
from drinking the whiskey with his friends after work,
with him there was no cotton wool,
we had to learn early to just stand him down;
don't you dare cower he'd think you a fool,
toe-to-toe we would face him without any fear,
and so Dad taught us fearless gives power to pull 
bullies into their places of murk,
So I say: Beware; for I am fearless, and therefore powerful.”*

* Mary Shelley, Frankenstein
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write. A wonderful ending. We start to learn about life from our parents. Have a blessed day with your win............
Roper Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Wow, what an impact of words for the contest. Very well done, Chetta. Good luck in the conte
Achara Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Thank you
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 5:45 PM
well constructed and solid contest contender.
Achara Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 5:59 PM
Thank you. Sadly, a true story. My dad was a belligerent alcoholic. Yes, he was scary when drunk, but it made us tough and able to stand up to bullies.
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