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Borrowed Breath

Written: December 27, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley *************** Nutrition hums in quiet seeds that wait to rise, A vow from earth and flesh, body never denies. Exercise is motion’s hymn pulse that keeps us true, a dialogue of sinew saying live in what you do. Water shapes its quiet course through all that's unseen. It shows us how to bend, yet remain serene. Sunshine is the ancient fire that crowns the waking day, a golden grammar written on the skin in slow array. Temperance is the narrowing gate where choices meet, Discipline of turning from the sugar to the wheat. Air is the first and final gift, the breath we never own, a borrowed wind reminding us we’re travelers alone. Rest is the hush that gathers all our scattered parts, a night-long stitching of the seams in tired hearts. Trust in God is stepping where the lantern’s glow is thin, believing there is beyond what the senses pull us in.
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Hawley Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:29 PM
I like the fact that this is a couplet---AND an acrostic. Very nice and congratulations on your win in my contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your win. How did I miss this wonderful "Borrowed Breath" write from you??? Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:47 PM
Each couplet contains insight and wisdom...such a flow to this poem that left me with a feeling of gratitude. I especially liked: Air is the first and final gift, the breath we never own, a borrowed wind reminding us we’re travelers alone. Wishing you and yours a stellar new year, Texas hugs, Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 1:47 AM
Great couplets. I would appreciate your last one. Happy New Year.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 11:58 AM
New Start is here Wonderfully defined !
Rolland Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 7:09 AM
very interesting definitions, i love specially the last stanza, à lire et relire, merci poète
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