Born This Day

a northern star, a guiding light
weary travelers rest this night
swaddled baby laid upon hay
a holy king was born this day

the angels sang from up above
a triumph of heavenly love
the weary seek and come to pray
a holy king was born this day

the gifts they bare from near and far
as they followed this shining star
one darkened eve it lit their way
a holy king was born this day

this fair child light upon his skin
was born to save the world from sin
in a manger laid upon hay
a holy king was born this day

although so many years ago
this story we have come to know
it's not of santa and his sleigh
a holy king was born this day

December 7, 2019
In Praise of God Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 1/20/2020 3:39:00 AM
I think it's very important for us to teach our children the real reason for Christmas. They have learned too the true story behind Santa Claus. I enjoyed your lovely Kyrielle. Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/20/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie... a friend of mine used to have a cake on christmas for Jesus so her children (and mine) knew the reason for the season but many children do not, sadly... hugs and blessings XoXo
Date: 1/18/2020 9:22:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra! Congratulations on your placement! Hugs...Kim
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/18/2020 8:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim for hosting this contest and for the win...i struggle with rhymes but thought perhaps i could handle the form (i had written one before) i am always thrilled to place with a rhyme poem for this reason... hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 12:24:00 AM
Loved this poetic story and reminder. Reads like a song...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 2:49:00 PM
This is so eloquent, Sandy. A classic. A wonderful entry for the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/9/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon... :) hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 10:17:00 AM
Beautifully crafted my friend. Your poem shine of the joy of the receipt of this wonderful gift to the world. Don't know how I missed this one this morning but glad I found it now. Best wishes in the contest.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/9/2019 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Chris... you know how much me and rhyme get along...i still struggle with it...some forms are easier than others...i wish i had the talent you possess my friend... hugs
Date: 12/8/2019 5:41:00 AM
Oh my yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, this is one of the most awesomely, wonderfully, brilliantly, penned poems for the true meaning of Christmas I've ever read.. Love this....
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/8/2019 7:36:00 AM
wow....thank you so much for such a kind comment Robert :) hugs
Date: 12/7/2019 5:04:00 PM
Yep, he's the reason we celebrate the season, not Santa Clause. Nice refrain.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/7/2019 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Juliet... a friend of mine used to have a cake on christmas, and before they would exchange gifts they would sing happy birthday... hugs
Date: 12/7/2019 4:17:00 PM
A real true portrait of the incarnation Sandy, told so well with lovely imagery and super rhyme. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/7/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon... hugs
Date: 12/7/2019 2:10:00 PM
I like the rhythm of your poem, Sandy. Your verses of faith reign serenity and celebrate the festive season.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/7/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay...i appreciate all your visits and kind comments my friend... hugs :)
Date: 12/7/2019 1:03:00 PM
Uplifting and inspiring poem that fills one's heart with true spirit of Christmas dearest, Sandra. A fav. Many blessings! Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/7/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios...especially for the honor of a fave...blessings and hugs to you my friend :)
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