Born On the 13th

Born on the 13th –     
must be fortunate –
of May, she`s not scared
and ever stays playful.

She grasps firmly springs
and jumps cause of mercy
into the gist of humble, 
the very observation.

Belittled the devilry,
touched by the fortune
she's glad that a man
fathomed her dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 7:16 AM
yes all is not always as predicted..such is life! Light 7 Love
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 2:23 AM
Interesting verse. Changed the ordinary into extraordinary. Keep writing. Sara
Goff Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 7:32 PM
whimsical! wonderful!,and thanks for comments! Oleg! "into the gist of humble" well done!!!!
Guzzi Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Belirus? wow not quiete sure where that is? somewhere which once was behind the Iron Curtain? Slovic? And who is the brave damsel above? Perhaps you can give me a dialect verse for my contest? Let me hear how your voice sounds speaking English? Light & Love
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 4:05 AM
Oleg, what an interesting look into ones life in a few lines. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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July 7, 2009 at 12:10 PM
I liked your choice of words implemented to express yourself... good job.....JP
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