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May be an image of water and ocean

broad strokes to ease that aching sky that shed its tears so hooves could fly of fears and fathoms, brought to dash upon the reefs where waves will crash a brine that birthed you deep as death by Neptune's grace, to take my breath how could this man of flesh and needs refuse these lithe and beautied steeds you see, this happened, not by chance they came to tempt my love to dance for long I've prayed these seas impart the wondrous means to melt her heart so should you bring her heart to swoon bedecked with beams of crescent moon beg, grant her your broad flanks to ride with haste and form straight to my side such equine dreams will beg she stays as I'm dissolved, deep 'midst her gaze like you - two eyes of chestnut brown that sea, where I will gladly ... drown.

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Date: 3/14/2022 10:02:00 AM
exceptionally fine rhyme! love the title and the rest of it but I am always partial to oceanic writes and this one's really lovely :)
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Date: 3/14/2022 9:44:00 AM
How very beautiful Gregory....great poem.....Debx
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