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my tribute thereto is

b(a ud bl oss som s) en r ewal Note: After ee cummings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 5/24/2009 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations for placing in: i thank you God for this most amazing (poetry) contest. Sponsored by: Michele Nold-Godleske. You composed an amazingly creative haiku for this contest. Your skill and freedom as a poet shine though. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:59:00 PM
Brian, congrats with your placement in the contest...Raul
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:59:00 PM
Warmest congrats Brian on your big win! So well desrved. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/22/2009 6:43:00 AM
This was so outstanding....a wonderful, and unusual, clever poem!! Congratulations on this winning cummings would be smiling!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:42:00 AM
A most unusual form that I quickly adjusted to and thoroughly enjoyed thereafter...nice work poet! smiles, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/7/2009 6:54:00 AM
nice! I see the lines you draw here with your spelling and it's well done my friend. :) 2.. renew indeed! Izzy
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Date: 4/27/2009 9:58:00 AM
An original take ... exciting.
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Date: 4/24/2009 4:26:00 PM
Are you saying? ...bud /bad blossoms, does it ryhme as haiku? pls enlighten your reader. Thank you.
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Date: 4/24/2009 2:49:00 PM
Awesome write, Brian! I think you have actually surpassed ee in this poem.
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Date: 4/24/2009 1:27:00 PM
Wow, nice work, interesting write...Raul
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Date: 4/24/2009 1:18:00 PM
Excellent.....a unique version of ee cummings only Mr. Strand can do!! Kudos!!
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