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Boredom and Burning

Written: April 30, 2025, for a contest by Brian Strand ******************* blow out a candle amorist caring adoring passionate a paramour circumstances involve considerations bearing — strangers two slices of d a r k n e s s what's light nighttime eyelid . . . illusions glowing, some flicker call us . . . but I call — it boredom being as light s t r a n g e r s mirror fractured by gaze of sight closest bond lingering snaging emerging from forecasting watching scattering ice melting yet vivid— heart sobbing from caught h a n d looked, & turned to begin fragments an attempt to halt red dripping. . . b l o o d of l o v e — OPEN FORM created by Brian Strand in lowercase without grammatical symbols, uses spaces&breaks relying upon 'the one breath limitation' & as a 'happening' requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input &respond in a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood & thus is inherently variable.

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Date: 5/2/2025 6:40:00 PM
SP, after reading I'm thinking how lucky those of us are who have love that is not boring. Your use of this imagery makes it clear that relationships are not easy to manage and feel good about.
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Date: 5/2/2025 1:05:00 PM
Congrats, Lasaad!
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Date: 5/2/2025 12:06:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations dear poet on your high placement in Brian`n poetry contest with a wonderful poem full of imagery and crafted with an imaginative mind.
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Date: 5/1/2025 5:34:00 PM
Amazing work, Sotto, this is definitely going into my favs, it's very intense, with so so much feeling
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Date: 5/1/2025 7:25:00 AM
Very creative wordplay throughout this dr sotto, i love the arrangement of lines and how youv done open verse in such a catchy manner! The opening and ending in this stands out especially loved "mirror fractured by gaze of sight closest bond lingering snaging emerging from forecasting watching" deep and catchy! And very unique! Thought provoking write youv delivered for brians contest! Bet it is a top winner! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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