Border Brilliance

in the dayspring light

blue,green,white colours of June

mingle,to delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 1:06 AM
The mingle of colors, brilliant observation...Raul
Bird Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 10:51 PM
I love your haiku's they are always filled with so much beauty and you know how to throw the paint to the canvas Brian style.
Ahmad Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 3:44 PM
Unique way of blending, Brian.... you rock!
Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 3:29 PM
I like the mix of colors here, too. I forgot to mention that, earlier. I enjoy your work. It has a distinctive tone. That's a gift you should not take lightly. Regards, GK
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June 17, 2009 at 2:58 PM
Dayspring is an unique word and it somehow fits here rather snuggly like a Junebug. Thank you for your kind words on my entry and I enjoy entering your contest. They are different and they force me to stretch myself. Regards, GK
Sheart Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Hi Brian Such a breathtaking write. Love spring and all the beautiful colours that come with the season. Thanks for putting a smile upon my heart with this beautiful portrait you paint. Love Light Truth Patricia
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Indeed they do, Brian! The spring colors can add so much joy to our lives. Wish spring would last forever. Very nice haiku! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 7:07 AM
I love this image....makes me think of a Monet...colors of a garden! Lovely! ~ Thank you for your kind comments, Brian. ~ Love, Carrie
Higgins Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 5:03 AM
This is a beautiful work Brian..so well written by your talented pen.
Goff Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 3:19 AM
yes, the impressionist blend of June is captured by this fine haiku! Brian, jim
Docherty Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 12:11 AM
Beautifully thought out Brian, makes me think of lazy summer days lounging between the daisy's! Thanks for bringing us some sunshine to brighten a very overcast morning! Kindest thoughts, Anna-marie.
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