Caren Krutsinger Poet Rhyme

Bong Bitty Bong Bitty Bong Bitty Bay

Bong bitty bong bitty bong bitty bay
You are the bottom thought for me every day.

Hong hitty hong hitty hong hitty hay
I am the top dog, and I simply don’t play.

Zong zitty zong zitty zong zitty zay
You’re a spectacular example of dirt within hay

Mong mitty mong mitty mong mitty may
If I know you’re going to be there, I’ll just stay away

Dong ditty dong ditty dong ditty day
Our friends no longer like you. They’ll hold you at bay.

Fong fitty fong fitty fong fitty fay
I won all of them in the divorce, so please go away, Ray.

Submitted to Nick Trim’s 8 Mile High Contest
June 19, 2018

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Ilene Bauer June 19, 2018 at 2:05 PM i'll bet you had fun writing this, caren! i sure had fun reading it... Caren Krutsinger June 20, 2018 at 6:45 AM I did have fun. Even though I had already met this challenge, and lost the first "rap".

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2018 at 12:01 PM Hahaha - the joke's on Ray! I enjoyed reading this very witty, humorous piece! Great rap - good luck in the contest! Hugs Pandita