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Bong Bitty Bong Bitty Bong Bitty Bay

Bong bitty bong bitty bong bitty bay You are the bottom thought for me every day. Hong hitty hong hitty hong hitty hay I am the top dog, and I simply don’t play. Zong zitty zong zitty zong zitty zay You’re a spectacular example of dirt within hay Mong mitty mong mitty mong mitty may If I know you’re going to be there, I’ll just stay away Dong ditty dong ditty dong ditty day Our friends no longer like you. They’ll hold you at bay. Fong fitty fong fitty fong fitty fay I won all of them in the divorce, so please go away, Ray. Submitted to Nick Trim’s 8 Mile High Contest June 19, 2018

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Date: 6/19/2018 2:05:00 PM
i'll bet you had fun writing this, caren! i sure had fun reading it...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/20/2018 6:45:00 AM
I did have fun. Even though I had already met this challenge, and lost the first "rap".
Date: 6/19/2018 12:01:00 PM
Hahaha - the joke's on Ray! I enjoyed reading this very witty, humorous piece! Great rap - good luck in the contest! Hugs Pandita
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