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So sad about Napa Valley and all the fires!

Bonfire

BONFIRE lights a match lets it burn his fingers trees tremble as the flames branch out igniting twilight 10/10/2017 Landay Form
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Callus Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Short, but lovely and expressive; impressive ending, Kim. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Yuhas Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Great write Kim, Blessings
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October 11, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Thanks, Pete!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:47 AM
Excellent. Well said. Love it. Thanks for sharing it.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Thank you, Ravi!
Gasun Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 12:39 AM
Very well said in few words my dear friend, Kim. It reminds me of the bonfire near our place when I went back home. Thanks for sharing and your visit on my poem. Hugs and more blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Thanks, Galeo!
Michelle Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 11:58 PM
Such a little beauty... lets it burn his fingers... I love it! Love, Juli-Michelle
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Thanks, Juli!
Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Very nice, Kim, I love this little gem! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Greg!
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