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So sad about Napa Valley and all the fires!

BONFIRE lights a match lets it burn his fingers trees tremble as the flames branch out igniting twilight 10/10/2017 Landay Form

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/11/2017 2:08:00 PM

Short, but lovely and expressive; impressive ending, Kim. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2017 7:53:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

Pete Yuhas

Date: 10/11/2017 10:33:00 AM

Great write Kim, Blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thanks, Pete!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/11/2017 2:47:00 AM

Excellent. Well said. Love it. Thanks for sharing it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/11/2017 12:39:00 AM

Very well said in few words my dear friend, Kim. It reminds me of the bonfire near our place when I went back home. Thanks for sharing and your visit on my poem. Hugs and more blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2017 11:09:00 AM

Thanks, Galeo!

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/10/2017 11:58:00 PM

Such a little beauty... lets it burn his fingers... I love it! Love, Juli-Michelle

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thanks, Juli!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 11:23:00 PM

Very nice, Kim, I love this little gem! :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2017 11:23:00 PM

Thank you, Greg!