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Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings

Thump goes the dead bass drum A steady rhythm in my chest, As the melody starts to hum My achin' bones wanna rest, Still, my old soul jumps alive When those swingin' beats begin, These achin' joints they do thrive With my jaw's widenin' grin, 'Round my skull digs that jive Just wait 'til it finds my chin, Dyin' songs waitin' to be heard Sounds of the soul deep within, Dancin' notes play around word A remedy already under my skin.

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Date: 7/6/2023 10:41:00 AM
music enables me to walk away from chronic pain....as you have eloquently ascertained in this poem....the stimulation of the auditory cortex is where it all begins....and what you feel we see in many toddlers bouncing around the room to music....loved the poem
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/15/2024 1:09:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Timothy, as always ... And, I agree, music can do some miraculous things :)
Date: 7/2/2023 9:12:00 PM
Music keeps us jiving despite the pains. So beautiful my dear poet friend Kelly. I love the rythm, image and message of your poem. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win and this excellent write! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/14/2024 6:32:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Len, as always :) Hugs!
Date: 6/25/2023 4:10:00 PM
Takes me back to my dancing days. And yet now noding is all we do.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/14/2024 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, John :)
Date: 6/22/2023 2:22:00 PM
Music truly has the ability to "jive" us back into life even when we hurt. Love your flowing rhymes, Kelly. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/13/2024 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Sam ... I appreciate your kind words :)

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