Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings

Thump goes the dead bass drum
A steady rhythm in my chest,
As the melody starts to hum
My achin' bones wanna rest,
Still, my old soul jumps alive
When those swingin' beats begin,
These achin' joints they do thrive
With my jaw's widenin' grin,
'Round my skull digs that jive
Just wait 'til it finds my chin,
Dyin' songs waitin' to be heard
Sounds of the soul deep within, 
Dancin' notes play around word
A remedy already under my skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ray Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 10:41 AM
music enables me to walk away from chronic pain....as you have eloquently ascertained in this poem....the stimulation of the auditory cortex is where it all begins....and what you feel we see in many toddlers bouncing around the room to music....loved the poem
Deschler Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Timothy, as always ... And, I agree, music can do some miraculous things :)
Gasun Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 9:12 PM
Music keeps us jiving despite the pains. So beautiful my dear poet friend Kelly. I love the rythm, image and message of your poem. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win and this excellent write! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Len, as always :) Hugs!
Kauffman Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Music truly has the ability to "jive" us back into life even when we hurt. Love your flowing rhymes, Kelly. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.
Deschler Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 6:07 PM
Thank you for reading, Sam ... I appreciate your kind words :)
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