Sara Kendrick Poet Monoku

Bone Dry Without Him

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Went to the creek for inspiration, bone dry
                                                          where is the spring?



One Amazing Line
Contest entry for Constance La France's latest contest
Written by:
Sara Kendrick
December 6, 2010

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Adell Foster December 10, 2010 at 10:36 AM Awesome wiritng Sara, seems that the creek was not so dry after all ;-) I've truly enjoyed the read. Best of Luck in the Contest. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2010 at 1:07 PM I really like this one, Glad I came to see it!!

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway December 8, 2010 at 12:55 PM great line Sara... I've looked for my "spring" and could not find it before also. Lay

Joy Wellington December 6, 2010 at 8:24 PM I know the thought here my friend, good luck for a win with this thought provoking line. Thanks for your best wishes. Blessings Joy (Jew)

Poet Tacito December 6, 2010 at 11:55 AM Good luck with this entry. This was strong.

Wilma Neels December 6, 2010 at 10:33 AM Sara, all the best with this gem in Constance's contest ;) Wilma

Francine Roberts December 6, 2010 at 8:42 AM wonderful entry Sara, best of luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire December 6, 2010 at 7:51 AM We won't see spring for quite a while, but it looks like you found inspiration for a great monoku, Sara. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta December 6, 2010 at 7:47 AM Nice thought, Good luck, Sara

Tahera Mannan December 6, 2010 at 5:38 AM An amazing line really. All the very best for the contest.

Michael J. Falotico December 6, 2010 at 5:27 AM Nice entry Sara... I like your image and form...have a great day...luv Michael