William Kelii Kekaula Poet Lyric

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Bon Jovi: Always

Bon Jovi: Always

This Romeo is bleeding, but you don't see his blood,
For it is pulsating in him, finding ways to join his love,
Way out is found, a kind of gift, bottled by a crying dove,
Romeo dies and Juliet rise, and cries begins to flood,
Oh, blade I found be not dull and send me to my true love,
Always, as love should be, here on Earth or up above,
If humans aloft, angels they are, neath Earth be turtle dove,
Now they are in Heaven, they ALWAYS thought the world of.

2020 February 20

*3rd Place*

Famous poetic lines 3 - Love songs
~~Silent One

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2020 at 7:50 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula February 23, 2020 at 7:55 AM Thanks, Anne Lise -- Aloha!~@wk

Silent One February 23, 2020 at 6:44 AM you captured the essence of the line very well... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. William Kelii Kekaula February 23, 2020 at 6:47 AM Thanks again, Silent One, for the placement, as well as, the opportunity -- Aloha!~@wk

Eve Roper February 20, 2020 at 9:17 AM Beautiful verse, William. Oh, Romeo, the pain of love so hard to bare. A poet you are my friend with sweet words only the old poets form. Good luck. William Kelii Kekaula February 20, 2020 at 11:03 AM Ah, my dear friend, what joy that words form a day only to ascend in such a way, that when night descends upon our rest, that echoed peace forever lasts, -- Aloha!~@wk