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Bombs Away

Bombardier acorns pop against asphalt armor bounce off, spent brown shells.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/31/2010 3:53:00 AM
Well done on the Haiku, unfortunet sad to the ones it affect when lifes are taken. Gerad enjoy your Memorial Day,,IRMA
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:21:00 AM
This Haiku is so cool. I like it alot! Wish I'd have thought of it.
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Date: 8/23/2009 8:57:00 AM
Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading Gerard. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2009 12:52:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Gerard.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:35:00 PM
Unfortunately, this is reality. Good use of imagery and alliteration to convey your thoughts. Karen
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