Bombs Away

Bombardier acorns
pop against asphalt armor
bounce off, spent brown shells.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 31, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Well done on the Haiku, unfortunet sad to the ones it affect when lifes are taken. Gerad enjoy your Memorial Day,,IRMA
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November 29, 2009 at 6:21 AM
This Haiku is so cool. I like it alot! Wish I'd have thought of it.
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August 23, 2009 at 8:57 AM
Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading Gerard. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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August 23, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Gerard.Rgds Brian
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August 22, 2009 at 7:35 PM
Unfortunately, this is reality. Good use of imagery and alliteration to convey your thoughts. Karen
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